Viruses

Both plagues are killing tons amount of people in a little amount of time. The viruses both cause the lack of religious things because people did not want to water up around a lot of people because they could contract the virus. Everyone was so scared of both viruses because they are so highly contagious that it causes straight fear. The symptoms are very very similar but the COVID-19 attacks more of the lungs.

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  1. Trevyn, this blog reads like something you wrote in about thirty seconds, and didn't bother to proofread. Read these sentences out loud, and see how they don't make sense. "Both plagues are killing tons amount of people in a little amount of time." What does "tons amount" even mean? And, "The viruses both cause the lack of religious things because people did not want to water up around a lot of people because they could contract the virus." I don't understand what you are trying to say when you write "viruses both cause the lack of religious things," and "people did not want to water up around a lot of people." Please put more effort into what you write, and re-read what you wrote before you hit Publish. 6/10

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